万界之开局就无敌
作者写的不好，请在书评区写下建议（旧版）

作者自己知道自己写的不好，因为新手上路嘛！

是文笔不够？或是哪方面描写不够多？亦或是结构太紧凑等？

写的不好尽管骂，让作者看见，等文笔练好了，作者会专门再写一篇剧情相同的小说，算是为了自己的兴趣吧

無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱無馱

读书三件事：阅读，收藏，加打赏！